Analysis of A brief aquaintance



Kiss me gently, tickle my spine.
Rattle my bones and penetrate my mind.
Your mine to hold if only for tonight.
Your eyes cut through my flesh like wind on a cold night.
Our bodies are pressed together tight.
Our hearts beat as one toghether and this feels so right.
Together we place this bookmark in time.
When our spirits danced under the moonlight.
When it is time for us to part everything will be just fine.
You never called me yours and i never called you mine.
If i wake in the morning and I'am blind.
Then I will be happy that the last face I saw was yours, and it was imprinted on my mind.


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Metre 11101011 101101011 1111110101 111111111011 1010110101 101111101111 0101111001 1101011001 11111111101111 1101110110111 11100100111 11111010111111011010111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 587
Words 117
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 467
Words per stanza (avg) 117
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Submitted on April 06, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rosco daw

d-ory@hotmail.comIf I try to describe myself I can't cause I don't really know. I think I'm a bunch of different personalities in one body. I' am dark and a little depressed behind closed doors. But towards my friends I' am confident and happy. I struggle for acceptance from people but I do a great job of hiding it.Poetry is my release. Without it I could'nt function. But I think I was always meant to have it. I had never written a poem until I was 22 years old. I did'nt even know I could write a poem until someone special inspired me then shattered my heart. I believe this is why I write mostly dark, depressive poems. Because that's how it all started for me.My tag is weight of the world. Reason being I believe the weight of the world is on the shoulders of a few. And most of us are just standing around consuming and polluting waiting for others to clean up after us. I reflect some of this in my poetry.I live in Hobart, Australia and I' am 24 years old. Thanks for reading. Leave comments, your thoughts and I will return the favour.P.S There are certain words spelt differently in Australia so please keep this in mind when reviewing my poetry. And I 'am on facebook under rosco daw. E-mail at top of page.... more…

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