Analysis of Our Song
I am afraid to say some words
But I'm sure I should say a lot more
Open myself and drop my soul
God pick up my pieces, now I'll fly and roar
Creating the song the rhyme
The silent, the peace the quiet time
Remembrance of moments
and Waves that kisses the edge of the sky
In my empty space the winds its comes
spreads my roar over the mountains,
over the clouds
I can't find my senses in these walls
that surrounds me day and night
I can't fly I can't see the sky
I can't find the words
Where's my hope ?
Where's my way?
In silence waiting for the sound
I raise my arms and cry my pray
In calm and peace shall wait his say
Love and forgiveness fulfill
My empty space
I should keep going
Fly, trace my route into new dreams.
Scheme | ABCBDDEFGHIJKFALMNMMOPQR |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11011111 111111011 1010111 11111011101 0100101 010010101 010110 0111001101 011010111 11110010 1001 111110011 1011101 11111101 11101 111 111 01010101 11110111 01011111 1001001 1101 11110 11110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 717 |
Words | 146 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 24 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 561 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 150 |
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Submitted on January 20, 2016
Modified on April 17, 2023
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