Analysis of My Exodus



Like a voo-doo doll I was under his control
No way to escape
In this world there is no one to console
I fake smile through my reality
Knowing deep within
Someday my dream would find me
This world is so fake
Our minds are gone
Our hearts have been misplaced
Never again will I swallow the seed of bitterness
I was defeated once
My mind since has learned of bliss
Free from the cage of abyss
Once you realize your soul is gold
You become free
The light within you will always glow
This is my Exodus


Scheme ABACDCEFGHIJJKCLH
Poetic Form
Metre 101111110101 11101 0111111110 1111110 10101 111111 11111 10111 1011101 10011110011100 110101 1111111 1101101 11101111 1011 01011111 111100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 496
Words 98
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 398
Words per stanza (avg) 98
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Written on 2023

Submitted by amandak on May 03, 2024

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