Analysis of A Funeral Walkaway Parade



Nothing seems to be of anything to me anymore.

Something in me lost itself in the Evermore-.

I tied the knot and hung it loose beneath the willow branches of the creaking noose.

And as my eyes began to fade, a lurking silhouette broke my dire gaze.

Somehow, I saw your blossom in the shadowy plains.

So lucent and grand were you, I dare not look away.

Night-shaded tangled locks, moonlit skin, and purple orbs; I fell for the Queen of Evermore-.

Trust… trust… trust… trust me when I cling to all of that in you which is anything but good.

Just touch your lips to mine and I shall do the rest, my love.

Don’t be afraid, I didn’t mean to scare you.

I promise it won’t hurt when I begin to swallow you.

Close your eyes, and I’ll guide your fate, as I carry you so shall we grow root, bark, and knot into the flowers of the Evermore-.

Soundness insecurities and faultless imperfections of clay-turned bone grow deep within your soul.

I’ll creep, crawl, climb, and claw until I break my heart atop your orchard wall.

Not a broken heart but a vow of spellbound love.

So, shatter thine heart and barter me your piece for mine; then shall we both be completed by one another’s lonesomeness.

A fallacy of awe-inspiring lopsidedness.

A bowed pendulum quivering from catastrophic fondness to nefarious passion.

I am too connected to you to walk away.

I am too attached to you to fade away.

I’m taking you home with me, all dressed in black - to attend our funeral walkaway parade.


Scheme A A B X X C A X D E E A X X D B B X C C X
Poetic Form
Metre 101111101101 10011010010 1101011101011010101 01110111010011111 111110001001 1100101111101 11010111010111101110 11111111111101111011 11111101110111 1101111111 11011111011101 111011111110111111101010101010 100100010101111110111 111101011111011101 10101101111 1101101011111111110101111 0100110101 011001001010101010010 111010111101 11101111101 1101111110110110100101
Characters 1,509
Words 310
Sentences 21
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 54
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Written on April 02, 2024

Submitted by JJJJTTTT on April 02, 2024

Modified by JJJJTTTT on April 02, 2024

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