Analysis of The clouds get in my way.



The clouds get in my way.

Now the time has come and gone. To say I love you can't be wrong. But I'm weak, and you are strong. I can hear the storms far away, but it's the clouds in my mind that get in my way. They rain and snow on me every day. I wish they would go away. But now it's time to say goodbye and say I love you one last time. The scent of apple blossoms in the air. I do love you, and I do care. But still, I wear the scars you bare. But i get caught up in your snares and now I have to go away but there's nothing else for me to say. But I'm still in love with you okay. The silly grin and pretty smile was yesterday.


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Poetic Form Monorhyme
Metre 011011 101110111111111111011111101101110101111011110111100111111011111111011111110111010001111101111111011111111011011111011110111111110111101010101110
Characters 634
Words 140
Sentences 15
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 235
Words per line (avg) 69
Letters per stanza (avg) 235
Words per stanza (avg) 69

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Written on April 01, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on April 01, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on April 02, 2024

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 · 1958 · Swansea, MA

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