Analysis of Escape?

Ronald Bunch 1982 (Grand Rapids)



Escape from jail
With no bail.

He was drunk
With a slam-dunk.

A basketball player no less.
A made-up story, I confess.

He was running for his life.
The news could handle the strife.

He knocked her teeth out with a fight,
Killed the woman and took a bite.

A nightmare came true,
Only his eyes were black and blue.

She rejected him, and she couldn’t fly.
He didn’t know she was bi.

The police caught him again
For this bad sin.

If he was in hell, he couldn’t escape,
So he felt bad and would never rape.

He came to the Lord with nothing to afford,
For the grace of jesus he did plea

And he fell to his knee,
Now he would never fail and be free.


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE FF GG XX HH XI II
Poetic Form
Metre 0111 111 111 1011 0101011 01110101 1110111 0111001 11011101 10100101 0111 10110101 101010111 111111 0011101 1111 111011101 111101101 11101110101 101110111 011111 111101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 658
Words 156
Sentences 13
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 44
Words per stanza (avg) 12

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Submitted by RonaldBunch on March 11, 2024

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Ronald Bunch

Ronald Bunch is a dedicated and passionate writer with a deep love for the art of poetry, science fiction, and fantasy. He’s committed to his Catholic faith and his work. Ronald's interests span a wide range, including writing, reading, social media, weight lifting, and riding an exercise bike. He’s on a journey to become a published author. He's writing a new book, he will seek an agent and traditional publication for it. He did volunteer work at Kids Food Basket, and Habitat for Humanity. He loves pizza and cats. His upbringing in Catholic schools and his birthplace in Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA, in 1982, have also shaped who he is today. more…

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