Analysis of Clear, delusion

Syd Francis 1980 (Lebanon)



It's ok,
You're ok,
Just leave me here,
Day by day,
Live your life,
Without me,
Now I see; that you're ok,
Now I see; that I'm not to stay,
All the thing that I had to say,
Mean nothing to you,
Now that you're ok,
To live your life;
While the thought remains,
That the one for you,
Is a long way away.


Scheme AABACDAAAEACFEA
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111 1111 111 111 011 1111111 11111111 10111111 11011 11111 1111 10101 10111 101101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 307
Words 81
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 216
Words per stanza (avg) 64

About this poem

I wrote this a very very long time ago about being friend zoned.

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Written on April 07, 1999

Submitted by syd_f on March 11, 2024

Modified by syd_f on March 11, 2024

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