Analysis of Clear, delusion

Syd Francis 1980 (Lebanon)



It's ok,
You're ok,
Just leave me here,
Day by day,
Live your life,
Without me,
Now I see; that you're ok,
Now I see; that I'm not to stay,
All the thing that I had to say,
Mean nothing to you,
Now that you're ok,
To live your life;
While the thought remains,
That the one for you,
Is a long way away.


Scheme AABACDAAAEACFEA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (47%)
Metre 111 111 1111 111 111 011 1111111 11111111 10111111 11011 11111 1111 10101 10111 101101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 307
Words 81
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 216
Words per stanza (avg) 64

About this poem

I wrote this a very very long time ago about being friend zoned.

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Written on April 07, 1999

Submitted by syd_f on March 11, 2024

Modified by syd_f on March 11, 2024

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