Analysis of Divorce



In the quiet aftermath, where dinner conversations
Used to dance like fireflies,
Now sits silence, a heavy guest, uninvited,
Taking up space between the fork and the plate.

The house, once a symphony of laughter and chaos,
Feels emptied, like the aftermath of a carnival,
Where echoes of joy haunt the abandoned rides,
And I, a solitary wanderer, roam its halls.

Mom's eyes, once lighthouses guiding us home,
Now flicker with a sadness, soft and withdrawn,
Dad's voice, once a melody in the evening air,
Carries a tremor, like a songbird, unsure and forlorn.

I've read the stories, seen the movies, heard the tales,
Of marriages like ships, sinking,
But never thought our family portrait would fray at the edges,
Leaving us clinging to the pieces, silently thinking.

Divorce, a word heavy with the weight of broken promises,
Whispers through our home like a winter's chill,
It's not just the parting of two hearts that once danced in unison,
But the division of a child's world, against their will.

The good? Perhaps it's the peace, like the eye of a storm,
Where screams and shouts no longer tear the night,
It's in the new beginnings, the hope of happier days,
In the understanding that sometimes, letting go is right.

The bad is in the birthdays, now a tale of two cities,
In the holidays that feel like negotiations,
It's in the "I miss you" left unsaid, because where do you send it
When home is now a concept

The consequences are in the growing up too fast,
In learning that love is not always a fairytale,
It's in the wisdom gained from pain, the resilience born of tears,
In finding strength within, when you feel frail.

For in the heart of a child caught in the riptide of divorce,
Lies a depth of understanding, profound and wise,
That love is not a life sentence, but a series of choices,
And from the ashes of the old, new beginnings can rise.

So here I stand, a teenager, amidst the ruins and the rubble,
Witnessing the transformation of the world I knew,
But within me burns a hope, fierce and undying,
That from this pain, from this loss, we will emerge anew.

For life is not a story of simply the good or the bad,
But a tapestry of experiences, woven with threads of all hues,
And though divorce has reshaped the landscape of my childhood,
It has also taught me about resilience, love, and the power of renew.

So let this poem be a testament, a beacon for those navigating,
The turbulent waters of change, of endings and of starts,
Remember, even in the deepest sorrow, there is a light that shines,
Guiding us forward, healing our hearts.

For we are more than the sum of our parents' choices,
More than the casualties of love's complex wars,
We are the architects of our destinies, the authors of our stories,
And in us, the strength of a thousand stars.


Scheme ABXX XCXX XXXX XDED EFXF XGXG HAXX XIXI XBEB CJDJ XXXJ DKXK EXHX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (54%)
Metre 001010110010 111110 11100101010 10110101001 0110100110010 110101010100 11011100101 010100100111 111101011 11010101001 111010000101 1001010101001 110101010101 11001110 11011010010111010 10110101010010 010110101110100 10110110101 1110101111110100 1001010110111 0101101101101 1101110101 10010100111001 0001010110111 0110011011110 00101110010 1001111010111111 1111010 010010010111 01011111010 1001011100100111 0101011111 10011011001101 10110100101 111101101010110 01010101101011 1111010010100010 100001010111 101110110010 1111111110101 111101011001101 101001010001011111 010110101111 11101101010010010101 111101010001011100 01001011110011 01010001010110111 1011010101 11111011101010 110100011101 1101011010001011010 0010110101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 2,783
Words 557
Sentences 13
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 167
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Written on February 24, 2024

Submitted on March 10, 2024

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