Analysis of Mother Nature’s Luck



Deeply rooted, and forever intertwining throughout the loamy soil.
The breakthrough I needed from you.
Highly adaptable as I can be, thriving in the fullness of the sun’s kisses that never misses me.
My Pink Weeping Willow Tree, what will it be?

Standing strikingly suited as due my decorative pale pink flower bells,
sending songs in and out the air, where your arched branches cover me, when the wind appears
creating a chandelier of what’s real, healing is near.
Forever flexible, like an open book a wonderful collection, history will tell of me.
Cut out from my tree, the woven red blood that sits on me.
Spiritual symbolism has been bestowed upon me,
fallen branches releasing the weight that weighs heavily on me.
The beauty in my dance, it’s my rebirth, forever evolving floating in with the nights wind.
The powers that be, everything that makes me free, the most sacred seed that bleeds.”
The Metamorphosis of the Elite.

Out of broken love hear my cries arising forever surprising.
To rise against the mud, your delicate petals pushing through the grud,
push and push again, opening only to win, now to sit and soak up the sun back down again,
surviving the chocolate waters of the past. Blowing away with the breeze a wonderful wind that
holds thy angel’s grin.
Victoriously rising over and through the suffering among the most endangered stained blue, as
feelings of euphoria sets in at last, the calming with one inhale of Lotus blue gas, sleepless nights
won’t last.

You must not rush the alluring of my tangible smell. I wish you well.
Once more the wind catches me fast, blowing me back unto the green grass. The noble eightfold
I must take the balancing and challenges within self-enlightenment, I’ll begin again.
Wonderfully tainted and locked into my Fairy Clocks so delicately puffed, wishes blowing into
nothing, flying seeds carry my fairy wishes right to Heaven's stair well.
The tsunami of life I will bear, only to fall down again on those days wasted rains, inverted petals contains my water flows, that brings nourishment throughout the land, as edible as my leaves, just as delicious as utopias tasty treats.
The seeds I’ve laid, The mistakes I’ve made, The lost I’ve taste, The love I’ve gave.
Over flowing to this earth, like a volcano to erupt, designed to see you up,
Mother Nature’s Luck.


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Characters 2,350
Words 426
Sentences 23
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 10, 8, 9
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 60
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 462
Words per stanza (avg) 100

About this poem

Ahnama's poem “Mother Nature’s Luck” is about the natural advancement of nature and how it can be applied to our own lives as human beings. If you take the time to think about it it’s unbelievably amazing how one small seed can turn into an infinite field of flowers and plants. We are all seeds and with growth and time we can become our own abundance.

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Written on February 20, 2024

Submitted by Tiffany_Ahnama on February 22, 2024

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Tiffany Ahnama

(About The Author) As natural as a metamorphosis is to a caterpillar, that’s what poetry is to life. Poetry is a manifestation of the natural peregrination in someone’s life. With the captivating appeal of the many textures and variations of poems you get to walk a journey that takes you from where you are to where you would love to be. (Achievements) In 2011 “Metamorphosis” Ahnama's poem was internationally published shortly after her poem “Lost” won an honorable mention, in 2012. In 2022 Ahnama's poem “State Of Suspension #1973#” won a semifinalist position in a nationally published poetry contest and book. She is also in the running for a Pushcart Prize Nomination, and is currently in the process of writing her debut poem anthology book "The Metamorphosis of a Lyricist" (Chitter Chatter while Sipping Tea) Ahnama knew she loved writing but the excitement of writing to her is as natural as it is to breathe, realizing how embedded it is in her life. Ahnama adores the feeling of poetry in its rawest flows to the most uniformed forms. As she was growing as a writer, it wasn’t satisfying enough. Ahnama had to not only visualize, but to hear it. This is her as a spoken word artist come to life. Using her voice to take you on the journey, taking her words from sight to sound."The natural ombré merging into new phases of her artistry as a writer, She's so beautifully found her variety of voices as a new lyricist and narrator, she will continue her pandoras box of lyrics a new but sweet addition."From pen to sound". more…

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