Analysis of The stellar wind
The stellar wind in vacant sails,
Ripping through skin and meat,
And grinding bones to dust entails
For sake of new world kneading.
It`s tasteless and its colors range,
Beyond the grasp of feeble sight,
It`s unbiased and without grade,
There is no directing of flight.
And it`s the wind are only in a words,
In fact, it`s more a flow.
So floundering amidst these waves,
You find a seed of glow,
From shot right through - sobbing -
Of chaotic stream corpuscles,
And the pupil is dappled, pitted,
And vibrate even every muscles.
Звёздный ветер в ничьих парусах,
Раздирающий кожу и мясо
И стирающий кости во прах
Ради нового мира замеса,
Он безвкусен и спектр цветовой
Неподвластен убогому зренью,
И бесстрастен, не добрый - не злой
И отсутствует суть направленья.
Да и ветер-то лишь на словах,
А на деле - скорее теченье.
И барахтаясь в этих волнах,
Обретаешь крупицу свеченья
От прострела навылет - навзрыд -
Хаотичным потоком корпускул,
И зрачок испещрён, изрыт,
И вибрирует каждый мускул.
Scheme | AXAB XCXC XDXD BAXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01010101 101101 01011101 1111110 11001101 01011101 1100011 11101011 0101110001 011101 11000111 110111 111110 101011 00101110 0101010010 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic dimeter |
Characters | 1,405 |
Words | 203 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 13 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 52 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 21 |
About this poem
This poem is a translation I made of my Russian original.
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Written on January 24, 2024
Submitted by Ulenspiegel on March 05, 2024
Modified by Ulenspiegel on March 06, 2024
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