Analysis of Simple Cure



Hiding in the darkness, staying out of sight.
No friends for comfort, only the comfort of the night.
Trying to avoid peoples' hateful glares, despising their cold deep meaningless stares.
No one ever tried to understand who you truly are, tearing and shredding the thing you hold, the thing they called a heart.
All the hurt and pain inside, making you kill, making you cry.
Pushing and shoving making you hate, not realizing the monster that they create.
No ever taking the time to see the real you, causing you to kill them all on random que.
If they'd had only taken the time to see who you really were, they would have saw a girl with a broken heart and dark depression whom only needed a simple cure.


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Poetic Form
Metre 10001010111 1111010010101 10101101010101111001 1110110111101100100111011101 101010110111011 10010101111000101101 11010011101110111111101 11110100111111001111011010101010110100101
Characters 712
Words 136
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 70
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 557
Words per stanza (avg) 129

About this poem

Feelings from long ago.

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Written on November 14, 2002

Submitted by dianae.21293 on January 30, 2024

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