Analysis of Black Snow Falling From The Sky



BLACK SNOW FALLING FROM THE SKY – By Greg Sedlacek

Black snow, falling from the sky,

Looks like we’re all going to die.

We may have one last chance to try,

Showing a little kindness to the other guy.

Hot, orange sun rising in the west,

Just may be our final test.

Will we shine or will we fail?

Will evil reign or will good prevail?

We run to the oceans hoping to flee,

Then gasp in horror at a bright red sea.

Is it the blood from billions already dead?

Or yet another sign of our greatest dread?

Two headed newborns,

AIDS on the rise.

Kindergarten boys with earrings in their eyes.

Terrorist cells.  Cloning cells.

Television’s proof that sex and violence sells.

Militant groups with names we can’t comprehend.

Can’t anyone see it all points to the end?

Road rage. New age.

Show me a sage.

Botoxed ladies.  Steroidal men.

Whatever happened to good old Zen?

New World Order, Madoff, and Bailout scams.

A new generation of sacrificial lambs.

Corruption is everywhere,

Is it in you or I?

Whatever your answer, beware of the lie.

Will the end come as they say with a fire from above?

The seeds you sowed, were they of hate or love?

Might a giant meteor slam into Earth?

We’d all go quickly for what it’s worth.

If this message plays strange or plays odd,

Makes no difference -  you’d better find your god.

The sands of time cannot be reversed.

Earthly life is sordid, the next life could be worse.

Black snow falling from the sky.

Looks like we’re all going to die.

We may have one last chance to try.

Showing a little kindness to the other guy.


Scheme x A A A A b b c c d d e e x f f g g h h i i j j k k x a a l l m m n n x x A A A A
Poetic Form
Metre 111010111100 1110101 11011011 11111111 100101010101 110110001 11110101 1111111 110111101 1110101011 1101010111 11011100101 110101110101 1101 1101 1001110011 1001101 10011101001 1001111101 1101111101 1111 1101 11011 10101111 11101011 0101010101 010110 110111 1011001101 10111111010101 0111011111 10101001011 111101111 111011111 11100110111 011110101 101110011111 1110101 11011011 11111111 100101010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,619
Words 384
Sentences 36
Stanzas 41
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 29
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

This is a wakeup call for humans to start treating each other with kindness

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Written on June 26, 2012

Submitted by powerwords79 on December 07, 2023

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Greg Sedlacek

Greg Sedlacek currently writes for Weird NJ Magazine and has previously written for the New Brunswick Daily Home News and New Jersey Mnthlhy Maghazine more…

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