Analysis of What Will Our Poor Children Think (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



What Will Our Poor Children Think   (Bussokusekika)

Did it hurt Jewel
When I tore your mask away
And left you naked
Lying there before Charles
When husband and wife quarrel
What will our poor children think

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/21/2023


Scheme A BXXXBA X
Poetic Form
Metre 111011011 11110 1111101 01110 101011 1100110 11101101 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 251
Words 44
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

You still have not answered my question…Was any of this actually real or was/is all of this jest one of sweet Mary3’s magical spells cast with her sweet charms???IF you ever do search for Tommy2Souls…His favorite new song is by Kenny Roger’s and its The Coward of Thee County…Go figure…I wonder who on Earth his Becky could be???IF she were not of the 3…How bout them Gatlin boys???The plot thickens…Has anyone of anyone foolish enough to attempt juggling two Samurai swords blindfolded…As IF a toothpick weren’t bad enough…What in the heck is a toothpick???

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Written on December 21, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 21, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on December 21, 2023

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