Analysis of Shattered fantasy
The day I have been anticipating is finally here
The room was filled with petals and roses
The fragrance in the room was so romantic and filled
He turned my imagination into a reality
But sleep disrupted those moments as we both lay on the bed
The wedding night fantasy was a myth
The next day, we took on our helmet and breastplate
Like one who's prepared for war
We had sternly romantically prepared
And he was ready to shoot any locked doors
But what's really happening
I was in charge of those doors
In as much as I wanted him
There was no gain entry for him
I wasn't breathing
But what could be wrong
My first experience wasn't what I fantasized
Several attempts were made
The hospitals and their surgery
Months passed and with the frequency of pain.
I don't want his smile, hug, or anything related to it It was hard to cater for ourselves, our emotions. What then is it?
I searched through and discovered
It was Vaginismus- A fearful penetration
I was dealing with a psychological problem
Which took sex as a bad and painful thing
But must still be fulfilled as a duty
Met a counselor and gynecologist
Who put us through some therapy
And for the first time, we sailed through
And Lo, the experience became my fantasy
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Metre | 01111010011001 0111110010 0100011101001 111001001010 110101101111101 0101100101 011111101001 1110111 11100100001 01110111011 1110100 1101111 01111101 11111011 11010 11111 110100101110 100101 01001100 1101010011 111111110010111111101001100101111 1110010 111010010 111010010010 1111010101 1111011010 1010000100 11111100 01011111 0100100011100 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,248 |
Words | 251 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 11, 4, 5, 4 |
Lines Amount | 30 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 197 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 45 |
About this poem
Story of a girl who had always fantasize her wedding but unfortunately it got twisted.
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