Analysis of Blurry Vignette



I still remember those chemical gardens
We made in Chemistry lab
Now my eyes shed colorless blood
Which stains nothing but my heart

That smile you put on my face
Turned into gloom really quick
The sky turned all red, signaling the mere end
When the charm vanishes
Only the ashes are left

You are still a gibberish to my crumbled tongue
For you were the reason behind my words
I used to spell LOVE as Y O U
You broke me into pieces, and walked over them too

You are the unseen part of my deja vu's
The fragments I can't understand
Still you seem like a reverie
The world is no more intriguing
To exist is only the facet left!


Scheme AXXX XXXXB XXCC AXXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 11010110010 1101001 11111001 1110111 1111111 1011101 01111100011 101100 1001011 111010011101 1100100111 111111111 1110110011011 11001111101 0101101 11110100 01111010 1011100101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 627
Words 125
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 5
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 125
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

I wrote this poem when I lost a friend and I couldn't stop missing her.

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Written on October 20, 2023

Submitted by fatimraza57 on November 02, 2023

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