Analysis of Such Are Commonalities (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Such Are Commonalities   (Bussokusekika)

At times I wonder
IF the ring is a weapon
You know the cloud’s ring
The dark cloud of which I spoke
Could sea trout be a white horse
Such are commonalities

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   11/18/2023


Scheme A XXAAXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101001 11110 1011010 11011 0111111 1111011 110100 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 244
Words 45
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

I seemed to have misplaced a biblical passage about so and so and such and such casting a certain number of rings to somebody or someone…I wonder IF merry mea may have anything to do with this???Who knows???I wonder IF such a thing may be considered a stumbling block or some silly test???Oh well…It is getting late…I just had a silly thought I felt I should share after reading about expunge or should that be expunged???Might said ring be considered a destroying weapon as mentioned in Ezekiel 9???Tread as you may so desire…

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Written on November 18, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on November 19, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on November 19, 2023

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