Analysis of My brain



HEwO dErE
I aM dA  fiv yer old
And i am da bes kid in shool
I got da F’s in onglash
Witch maen

‘Fail’
Witch i do knot undastand
Bcaus

My handritng is da bes
And mi spelng is rely god

I sold hav da bes grad in da class
Now i am da cry in my bed

Scool vry bad
I am now vry sad

I wil gat mi revenge

I com to da scool

And i ask techer

“y do i hav da f”

And the teacher sad,

“Because you are stupid”

Ten i feel water

In mi eye

I com hom

I am now da depress

I com da mommy

“My teacher vry maen”

She said the final word

“We should hav never adopt u”

I aM dA  aDoPtEd!
I never knew


Scheme ABCXD CBE EX EX FF X C A X F G A X X E X D X X GD
Poetic Form Etheree  (33%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 11 111111 01111101 11101 11 1 11111 1 11111 0111011 111111011 11111011 111 11111 111101 11111 0111 111111 00101 011110 11110 011 111 111101 11110 11011 110101 11110011 111010 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 615
Words 158
Sentences 2
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 21
Words per stanza (avg) 7

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I wrote this poem because I am just doing this for fun.

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Submitted by nguyn3516 on October 04, 2023

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