Analysis of Let me be your guide

Elvirah 2000 (Gauteng)



Baby let my words
be music to your ears.
Let my hands give you direction
to your destination.
Let me be controller of your footsteps,
My eyes be your lighter when it's dark .
Let my smiley face be your second facial
when you are sad .
My shoulder be a pillow for you to cry on.
Let my ears be your dairy
to record on from past to future.
Let my soul be your pill
to give strength when you down.
Let my Hugs give you the love, you deserve.
Let my mind be your memory cave
so we can remember special moments.
Let my heartbeat emotionally bless you,
so you can feel how I love you .
Let my smile be proof
that I don't want to lose you.
In closing of your eyes ,
I shall be the only one you see.
In speaking, you shall praise my presence.
When travelling I shall be the map to your destination.
In future I will be the best you have .


Scheme ABCCDEFGHIJKLMNOPPQPRISCT
Poetic Form Tetractys  (28%)
Metre 10111 110111 11111010 11010 111010111 111110111 11101111010 1111 110101011111 1111110 101111110 111111 111111 1111101101 111111001 1110101010 111010011 11111111 11111 1111111 010111 111010111 010111110 11001110111010 0101110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 833
Words 185
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 637
Words per stanza (avg) 172

About this poem

It's about a women asking a man to trust her regardless of his fears , she's willing to show him love , trust , care and kindness

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Written on March 21, 2023

Submitted by Elvirah on October 28, 2023

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Elvirah

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