Analysis of Our Earth



        OUR EARTH
We all live on this big ball of rock,
spinning and rotating around the clock.
Floating in the middle of space,
relying on the sun to keep us in place.

Life is a gift that we take for granted
The earth is a beautiful curious planet,
full of environmental resources to keep us alive
that we all need to Share in order for us to survive.

No matter our race or color, we should all respect and love one another
and treat each stranger as our sister or brother.
Enjoy life and live each day as if it were our last.
Appreciate what people we know and don’t know
have given of themselves to us in the present and the past.

Don’t let greedy Rulers make us like them,
by hurting and killing many without amends.

We must stay united, caring and kind,
So we can all. survive and stay aligned
Amen

By: Barbara Tedesco


Scheme XAABB XXCC DDEFE XX GGX F
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 101 111111111 100100101 10001011 01010111101 1101111110 011010010010 11001010011101 11111101011101 11010111011101011010 0111011010110 01101111110101 01011011011 110101110010001 1110101111 110010100101 1110101001 1111010101 01 1100010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 835
Words 175
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 5, 2, 3, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

I wrote this poem right after 9/11/2001.

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Written on September 12, 2001

Submitted by kjbarbara69 on September 11, 2023

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Barbara Tedesco

At the time I wrote this I was split up from my abusive husband and I am a mother of 3. I am not a writer, but this came to me after 9/11/2001 tragedy, and I have felt I wanted to spread the word that we all need to change our ways, so we can all survive. Please spread my words. more…

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