Analysis of Feel and Hear God's Coming

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



Savior are you out there? The feel of your presence is near. I can hear bugles announcing your arrival. I kneel down before you in humble desire for your hand on my shoulder. I come to you with sin in my heart as I do I still repent and plead for your grace as you promised. You have given us your children of plenty throughout this world you made a beautiful world and modern times and temptation has kept us at arms reach of personal sin. Most of us in your way visit your grace and lay down all that is special to us asking for your forgiveness.  Dear Father you saw the writing on the wall 100'ds of 1000'ds of years in advanced how in our weakness we would even against our will give in to the dirt of life. We can always do better and in our hearts it wells up our eyes after all you have given us and all you still give we continue to be weak. As long as we can speak your name we shall have a place in our soul that informs us of how far on any given day we are from you. Help our ears always focus on that voice and plead to you to once again douce our soul with your graciousness and we start anew. Praise you Father.


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Words 229
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
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Words per line (avg) 230
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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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