Analysis of Loving you was never a mistake
Nakhiwe Mthethwa 2008 (Durban)
Falling in love with you was never a mistake,
A journey of emotions, a path we eagerly take.
In your eyes, I found a universe unknown,
A love so profound, a bond that's grown.
From the first moment our gazes met,
I knew deep within, you were a perfect bet.
Your smile, like sunshine on a cloudy day,
Melts my heart, takes my breath away.
Your laughter, a melody that dances in the air,
Filling my world with joy beyond compare.
Every word you speak, a symphony divine,
Whispered secrets, intertwining hearts with mine.
The touch of your hand, an electric spark,
Igniting flames, leaving imprints in the dark.
With each embrace, my soul finds solace,
Wrapped in your arms, love's sweet palace.
Together we've weathered storms and strife,
Through tears and laughter, the rhythm of life.
You've seen my flaws, yet loved me still,
Accepting every piece, my heart to fill.
In your love, I've discovered strength anew,
A love so fierce, forever and true.
Through highs and lows, we've learned to grow,
Hand in hand, conquering life's ebb and flow.
You've taught me the power of vulnerability,
To open my heart, embrace love's serendipity.
In your presence, I find courage and grace,
A sanctuary where my soul finds its place.
You're the melody that plays within my soul,
The missing piece that makes me whole.
In your eyes, I see a future so bright,
An eternal love, a guiding light.
Together, we dance on the threads of fate,
Crafting a love story that none can negate.
Through the seasons, our love shall endure,
A love so pure, forevermore.
Falling in love with you was destiny's call,
A tale written in stars, binding us all.
For you, my love, I'll forever strive,
To cherish and adore you, for as long as we're alive.
So let the world witness our love's embrace,
A love story that time can never erase.
Falling in love with you was never a mistake,
My heart's treasure, my soul's keepsake.
Scheme | Aabb ccdd eeff gghh iijj kkll mmnn oopp qqxe rrss nnAa |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain |
Metre | 100111110001 01010100111001 0111101001 011010111 1011010101 11101100011 111110101 11111101 1100100110001 1011110101 100111010001 1010100111 0111110101 01011001001 110111110 10111110 010110101 1101001011 11111111 01010011111 0111010101 011101001 11011111 1011001101 111010100100 110110110100 0110111001 0100111111 10100110111 01011111 0111101011 101010101 0101110111 10011011101 1010101101 01111 100111111 0110011011 111110101 11000111111101 11011010101 01101111001 100111110001 1110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,898 |
Words | 388 |
Sentences | 22 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 44 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 133 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 30 |
About this poem
This poem expresses the deep and unwavering love that the speaker feels for someone they have fallen in love with. It highlights the beauty, joy, and strength that their love brings, emphasizing that this love was never a mistake. The poem speaks of a profound connection, the acceptance of flaws, and the growth that the couple experiences together. It conveys the eternal nature of their love story and the profound impact it has on their lives.
Written on September 27, 2022
Submitted by nakhiwemthethwa00 on October 04, 2023
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