Analysis of SCREAMS OF THE MARY BELL



Suddenly there it was the flashing light of the lighthouse beacon.
As it zipped past me overhead
Recently my courage was renewed as the beam of light shone.
From a distant shore
I must have drifted ten miles or more for now my body is weary.
And I am about to give in
Don’t you give up on me I heard myself say hold on to yourself?
And pray.

We had celebrated the night before everyone was drunk no one.
Heard the captain’s bell.
When disaster struck the Mary Bell, it plunged beneath the icy
Waters
I heard the anguished screams of the dying as they passed me by
Still trying
It must have been the liquor in me for I cling to a tabletop.
Still looking at the others drop

Must I go on or should I stop it pains me so sometimes I
Believe I’ll pop.
For I know my turn would be the next I try to scream but to
No avail
The wind had stopped there was calm when the vessel and crew.
Could not prevail.
Then the waves grew rough splashing on my tabletop as if to
Say wake up get up.
I held on tighter with all my might as I drifted on throughout.
The night
The icy waters drench my bones there was a blindness in my\
Sight
Above my head, the searchlight shines too worn out to shout.
So, I drifted through the night.
 


Scheme AXXXBXXX AXBXCXDD CDEFEFEXGHCHGH
Poetic Form
Metre 100111010110110 11111101 100110101101111 10101 11110111111110110 01101110 111111111111101 01 111000101101111 10101 1010101011101010 10 110101101011111 110 1111010011111010 11010101 111111111111011 0111 111111101111111 101 0111111101001 1101 10111101110111 11111 1111011111110101 01 010101111101001 1 011101111111 1110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,222
Words 260
Sentences 16
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 14
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 316
Words per stanza (avg) 81

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As told by a survivor of a fishing boat.

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Written on February 13, 2023

Submitted on September 15, 2023

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Kenvil G Atkins

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