Analysis of Cosmic Love



Just look at the stars, you might find me there
In the tears of Neptune
I see you in constellation of northern direction,
You shine brighter than all starts put together ,
I’m on a different side, but still suit you better than any luminary around.
south and sweet I am to the ground.
I should be nice, you should be wild, seems like we changed the standards of life.
If you’re a fire, I’ll burn with you,
if you’re a water I’ll make it warm for you.
Damage it to the ashes, turn all around,
Baby, that’s my way of showing love.
I’m a fighter, you’re a silent watcher.
You’re a peace and I am a revolution soldier.
But at times of my deepest falls, you’ll be there to catch me from being drowned.
And gracious rivers will carry me home.
As it’s known
Home is wherever I will fall
And you will flow me to
“home is another word for you”.


Scheme ABCDEEFGGEHDDEIJKGG
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111111 001110 1110010110010 11101111010 110100111111011010001 10111101 11111111111101011 110101111 11010111111 10110101101 101111101 1010101010 101011001010 111111011111111101 0101011011 111 11010111 011111 11010111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 869
Words 178
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 637
Words per stanza (avg) 163

About this poem

That is my first work I’m actually proud of, so I thought of posting it. These are my delusions about being in space, in the constellation under which you were born, but at the same time being in love with a person who is on the other side of space. how to fit, how to love, how to manage my way out

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Submitted by annet.after on August 13, 2023

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Anna Cortner

I’ve always been obsessed with the idea of being a creator. I can create lives, stories, places, people, worlds. My biggest dream is to create something people would love to escape to, feel safe, protected, loved, understood. more…

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