Analysis of Why Did You Shut Me Out of Your Heart



Why did you shut me out of your heart,
Is it because I kissed you so loudly?
If you let me, I could kiss you silently.
If you let me, I could love you less
Like a butterfly.

Why did you shut me out of your heart,
Is it because I said so loudly that I love you?
If you let me, I could be quieter,
As shy as a nightingale!

Please don’t shut the door
of your Heart!
And please don’t let
me go deep into hell.


Scheme Abbxx Axxx xaxx
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111 1101111110 11111111100 111111111 1010 111111111 1101111101111 1111111100 1110100 11101 111 0111 111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 411
Words 99
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

This poem was written in July 2023, inspired by one of the poems of Emily Dickinson, named “Why did they shut me out of Heaven”. On the other hand, this poem dedicated firstly to Emily Dickinson, Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton and then all the lovers who did not get their love in the same way.

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Written on July 01, 2023

Submitted by ecekaradag on July 02, 2023

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Ece Karadag

Ece Karadag is a History of Art major student who loves writing poems. She wants to be a professor or a poet, or whatever, but she cannot decide. She published her first poetry book, "Lachrymose: The Tears of Wednesday" using her pen name, Emily Birdwhistle. more…

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