Analysis of Judah And Jerusalem (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Judah And Jerusalem   (Bussokusekika)

Some of you are from
Judah and Jerusalem
You too have been judged
Your spies have been watching me
They claim I’m a false prophet
And that I’m the deceiver

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh


Scheme X AAXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 10001001 11111 1000100 11111 1111101 1110110 01101 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 228
Words 40
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

This one was inspired by the Malachi…You too have become drunk and you have forsaken the bride of your youth…Your innocence has been lost…There are those among you who have seen my signet seal with your own eyes but you refuse to acknowledge it to be the Seal of The Living God…There is still time for you to repent and change your ways…I am not Elijah but My Fathers angels are ready to take me away with them on a moments notice…Though you may continue to believe that I am the beast IF you so do desire…For I am the first and the last one sealed with the signet seal gifted to me…Even My Father’s patience is wearing thin…Of course all of these current weather conditions are nothing more than climate change…

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Written on July 15, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on July 16, 2023

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