Analysis of Wisdom



I just want a chance to caught my breath, a second I hear my heart beat, I forgot to check if I was alive, living in motion of destruction, manipulating a smile on my face, so those that worry don't waste time on me. time I forgot to spend on myself, something I miss placed and forgot to look, unless you see, naw it's me just out of place, had no time so I lost control, my hands been off the wheel. Stay in a daze I assume everything was ok but as the weight drops I realize my crown was more important to me. The royal blood was boiling with misery, eyes blurred with curiosity, where have I travel there's no path behind me but the crumbs I follow, I've been here before smells so familiar taste makes me remember. I guess the only path for me is a lesson learned for others to see.


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Showing it's ok to hurt a little.

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Written on January 31, 2023

Submitted by Varoniquehealthcare on February 01, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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