Analysis of Nadeleine



Nadeleine,a beauty mama named me.
Darling,sweet nothings papa whispers.
Daleine, nickname friends carved.

Nadeleine,an angel from above,thee say.
Darling,a gift of immense pleasure.
Pray say,all of their hopes come to light!

Nadeleine,once a blooming zapherine,now a withered wall flower.
Birds fly with wings, now flying on weeds.
How far can this get?

Nadeleine,a birthed ray of hopelessness.
Darling,bundled rants of bitterness.
Daleine,a stranger I refuse to know.

He came onto me like a dhole.
Brutalized my fairness and forcefully took my innocence,shattering my conscience and making me an orb of darkness,I screamed but was never heard!

Nadeleine, shattered fairy lights.
Dark,doleful and debacle.
A dastard made a bastard out of Mama's nadeleine and papa's darling.
Hopefully,one day perhaps someday,I may take on my name again!


Scheme XXX XAX AXX BBX XX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011 1101010 1111 110111 1110110 11111111 10101010110 111111011 11111 1111100 111100 11010111 11101101 10110010011111001011111111101 110101 10010 011010111010110 110111111101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 885
Words 168
Sentences 19
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Nadeleine means ray of hope,a translation of what some women go through everyday. A story a sorry can't fix.

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Written on January 27, 2023

Submitted by marbatmuktar on January 27, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Marbat Muktar

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