Analysis of Moving moves mountains



Title: moving moves mountains
          Listening and waiting yet untold.
          Making known abilities capabilities,
          Creatings creates changes
          Making known abilities capabilities.
          Watching waiting long enough,
          Listening and waiting yet untold
          Yes!
          Denials detains me thou
          Critics clings to me thou,
          Watching waiting long enough.
          Awake, Awake!
          Waking me thou I speak,
          Moving moves mountains
          Moving moves mountains.
          Waiting yet not any longer,
          Moving mountains,
          I move on.
          Never wait long enough
          To critics speech.
          Moving mountains
          Moving moves mountains
          Alas!
          Critics I move
          Never see me thou again
          Moving on to mountain tops
          Moving now on,
          Thou moves.
           Moving moves mountains
           Feelings fears,
           Fished out.
           Moving hearts be me thou
           Positive!
           Moving moves mountains,
           Moving on!


Scheme aBCdCEBfggEhiAAjAkelAAmnopkqArsgtAk
Poetic Form
Metre 1010110 100010101 10101000100 10110 10101000100 1010101 100010101 1 010111 101111 1010101 0101 101111 10110 10110 10111010 1010 111 101101 1101 1010 10110 01 1011 1011101 1011101 1011 11 10110 101 11 101111 100 10110 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,143
Words 143
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 35
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 618
Words per stanza (avg) 115

About this poem

The poem narrates how some people do wait for long having hopes and dreams in them, yet not fulfilled because of one thing called fear. It also narrates how some people feel inferior, because they always get criticized for whatever they do. The poem then narrates how the inferior has decided to awake from the great cloud of inferiority, encouraging herself that taking a step, moves mountains. Listen not to the voice of people or critics, just be focused your dreams will come through. Be focused your dreams will never become a mirage. Take steps and move mountains, bid out fear from your side. 

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Written on January 05, 2023

Submitted by bilikisumohammed424 on January 04, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Mohammed Bilikisu Eleojo

I am a Nigerian, from kogi state Igala by tribe. I am an undergraduate in federal university of Nigeria located in lokoja, the capital of kogi state. more…

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