Analysis of First Sight

Andrea Suresh 2002 (Mumbai)



The day I saw him,
I knew he has to be mine!
Music started playing
 I could hear my heat thumping.

He was the only person I could see,
it was as if only we existed,
He sparkled like the sun ,so warm and bright,
And I like a sunflower started to bend towards his might.

He was sweet as nectar,
and I like a honeybee started to buzz around him,
I'd like to taste him, underneath my breadth I whispered,
And savor the taste, that I knew I couldn't afford!

I tried to approach him,
but just tucked my hair behind and passed by,
and each time I did, that moment, that instance ,
 Well....I hid my smile and passed by in silence.

I then once decided to confess to him,
and hence wrote a poem,
It was P.E lecture ,in my hand I held it,
But I asked myself for him am I fit?

I crumbled my Love of youth,
and threw it off with that poem,
I hope someday I could confess,
Because the Love hidden in my heart was never gonna get less.


Scheme AXBB XXCC XAXX AXDD AEFF XEGG
Poetic Form
Metre 01111 1111111 101010 1111110 1101010111 1111101010 1101011101 01101010110111 111110 0110101011011 111110111110 0100111111001 111011 1111101011 01111110110 1111011010 1111010111 011010 11110011111 111111111 1101111 01111110 1111101 0101100111101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 928
Words 216
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

This poem is about a girl who feels magical when she first sees a guy a falls madly in love with him , it shows how she felt watching him from afar. This short poetry contains her POV ,there's another part which shows his POV too (which I didn't submit since we can submit only one entry)

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Written on August 20, 2019

Submitted by andreasuresh143 on January 13, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Andrea Suresh

Hello I'm a 20 year old writer, currently pursing a degree that's nowhere near poetry or writings. An introvert who you can trust with all your secrets. An Indian girl looking for a miracle or maybe I should say working to become one. more…

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