Analysis of First Sight
Andrea Suresh 2002 (Mumbai)
The day I saw him,
I knew he has to be mine!
Music started playing
I could hear my heat thumping.
He was the only person I could see,
it was as if only we existed,
He sparkled like the sun ,so warm and bright,
And I like a sunflower started to bend towards his might.
He was sweet as nectar,
and I like a honeybee started to buzz around him,
I'd like to taste him, underneath my breadth I whispered,
And savor the taste, that I knew I couldn't afford!
I tried to approach him,
but just tucked my hair behind and passed by,
and each time I did, that moment, that instance ,
Well....I hid my smile and passed by in silence.
I then once decided to confess to him,
and hence wrote a poem,
It was P.E lecture ,in my hand I held it,
But I asked myself for him am I fit?
I crumbled my Love of youth,
and threw it off with that poem,
I hope someday I could confess,
Because the Love hidden in my heart was never gonna get less.
Scheme | AXBB XXCC XAXX AXDD AEFF XEGG |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01111 1111111 101010 1111110 1101010111 1111101010 1101011101 01101010110111 111110 0110101011011 111110111110 0100111111001 111011 1111101011 01111110110 1111011010 1111010111 011010 11110011111 111111111 1101111 01111110 1111101 0101100111101011 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 928 |
Words | 216 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 116 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 31 |
About this poem
This poem is about a girl who feels magical when she first sees a guy a falls madly in love with him , it shows how she felt watching him from afar. This short poetry contains her POV ,there's another part which shows his POV too (which I didn't submit since we can submit only one entry)
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Written on August 20, 2019
Submitted by andreasuresh143 on January 13, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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