Analysis of My Choice

Lynne Vaughan 1966 (Bronx New York)

Ode


My Choice, was the best Choice I made to keep Life apart of me, to produce into this world. My Choice was a Dear and rare Gem that I can still see the sparkle from no matter which way I turn. My Choice made the world a better place because he was always concerned. Love was his whole Spirit, that I still yearn to be so close to. My Choice meant everything to me,. and he was  so very special to me. My Choice never complained when Life dished out hard realities in his short Life he was a Giant and a gentle Ben, My Choice gave all he had inside to his family. A big family indeed but he was that main piece of glue to keep us closely together. He was full of Potential and Human decency  for his fellowman. That's why it so hard to fathom that my Dear Choice is not here with me. My Choice I would do all over again. knowing that you made such a great difference in the lives you touched. Sweet Angel, Lion of the Kind kingdom spread your Love all over this earth for one day You and I and your family  will rejoice again in a better place Sun you will always be the Sunshine in our lives and we will carry your Spirit with us for the rest of our lives. One very very Special person.... "My Choice" I Love you Forevermore Sail on to Greener Pastures with the Lord by your side, You are Free to be all you wanted in this Life  You've gained your Beautiful Wings I can see you flying high above me because your Spirit is now everywhere I Love You endlessly.  


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Characters 1,459
Words 289
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 1,136
Words per line (avg) 293
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,136
Words per stanza (avg) 293

About this poem

dedicated to my Precious Sun Choice Jordan Vaughan I wrote this poem as a tribute to a boy who always was a Man I Loved him deeply and Always will. Dear Sun you were the moon, the stars the Sunshine and the vast Skies I look to now missing you

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Written on February 05, 2023

Submitted by lynee3466 on February 05, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lynne Vaughan

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