Analysis of You lost me but will i tell you?
If l wouldve told you i was drowning
Would you have saved me?
I don't think i would be winning.
I never said you are wrong
Did you thought that made you right?
That's where you are wrong.
You said forget what i tell you
Will i really?
When i was out in blue
Calling you for hours made you happy
But what about me?
I felt more and more lonely
Your words consoled me while your actions hurted.
But that doesn't mean i will say that
I did what i felt a good friend should do
But i guess you ignored it intentionally
Making me question my existence in who.
Call me a liar and then forget it
You think i can?
Never in this lifetime this is what I can bet.
Life is miserable enough for you to be in it.
You think i will kick you out?
I am far better than you to attempt that shit.
| Scheme | ABACDCEBEBBBDFEBEGHIGJG |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 111111110 11111 11111110 1101111 1111111 11111 11011111 1110 111101 1011101110 11011 1110110 1101111101 111011111 1111101111 111101101000 10110101001 1101001011 1111 10011111111 11100001111101 1111111 111101110111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 775 |
| Words | 173 |
| Sentences | 13 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 23 |
| Lines Amount | 23 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 599 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 160 |
About this poem
The poem is about a girl whose friends don't treat her well and ends up loosing her. It's from the girls perspective. They've already lost her. But she doesn't tell this to them. She keeps it to herself that she no longer is friends with them.
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Written on December 23, 2022
Submitted by harshita2013.jk on December 22, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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