Analysis of Universe



Drizzle my heart,
with stars
when you say,
Love.
Glitter my hopes,
Engrave trust
with promises.
Stay,
Make the sky blush,
Hormones rush
Forgive me,
If my voice stumble
when I will lose the hold
on my poetic lines
to describe you.
Pause the moment,
for a minute or more.
A day,
without your fair presence
I wil write about you
I will keep writing about you,
about love.
And the stars,
will remind me of you,
being around
deeply in love.
Somewhere alone,
in the shared universe.


Scheme ABCDEFGCHHIJKLMNOCPMMDBMQDRS
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 11 111 1 1011 011 1100 1 1011 11 011 11110 111101 110101 1011 1010 101011 01 011110 111011 11110011 011 001 101111 1001 1001 101 00110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 480
Words 107
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 370
Words per stanza (avg) 88
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Submitted by pulkitasharma008 on December 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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