Analysis of Dying soul
Tears keep on rolling,
Rolling down my cheeks,
Emptiness has filled me,
In my heart.
Days turns into nightmares,
Nightmares turned into horror,
My happiness has gone,
It has gone for so long,
Searching for my inner peace,
But it is nowhere to be found,
Trying to take everything in slower pace,
But my dice doesn't ace.
Marking my own calender,
For each episode that is taking place.
Which makes me feel alone,
Subsidizing in my own world.
Feeling the fear,
Watching it when it slowly rise,
It rises to the core,
The core of breathtaking
Watching dripping blood,
To the floor.
While feeling my soul,
Leaving the body
Scheme | AXBX XCXX XXDD CDXX XXEA XEXB |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11110 10111 100111 011 11011 110110 110011 111111 1011101 1111111 1011100101 111101 10111 111011101 111101 1000111 1001 10111101 110101 01110 10101 101 11011 10010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 622 |
Words | 136 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 81 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 18 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem because I felt like slowly losing myself, my heart was broken... I couldn't live myself...
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Written on November 14, 2022
Submitted by Giralta on November 14, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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