Analysis of My universe



My universe
Where the galaxy wasn’t full of stars
Where the moon and earth didn’t have gravity
A place where it was empty
A place which was bit destroyed by wars

My universe
Where the water was too cold
Where raindrops evaporated way too fast
A place with melancholy and despair
A place where the end had to fold

My universe
Where wind blew yet not being breeze
Where birds tried to sing but couldn’t
A place too dry, for a beautiful snowflake
A place too barren, for the existence of mighty seas

My universe
At the end it was the only home I had
At the end I had to embrace the empty
When the breathing stops, and heart rests
When I finally sleep, too tired of being sad


Scheme Axbbx Acxxc Adbxd Aebxe
Poetic Form
Metre 110 101001111 1010111100 0111110 011110111 110 1010111 110100111 011100001 01101111 110 11111101 1111111 0111101001 01110100101101 110 10111010111 10111101010 10101011 1110011101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 696
Words 148
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 134
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

The poem is about the melancholy a person been through, when they expect their world to be bright and to find that what they actually encounter.

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Written on October 16, 2022

Submitted by asmitastudents on October 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Asmita Malik

I am a science teacher, a person who sees life in different shades, I had been writing since the age of 13 years. Writing makes me feel more at ease as letting your emotions out in some way is relaxing and keeps my mind calm, writing poetry is a way of living life it’s a method where a person find their own self. I hope if people read my poetry they somehow can relate to it. more…

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