Analysis of Just Before Her Wedding Day.



My eyes brightened in a dark eld,
Where trees were swaying in late hours.
A night, when the stars cease to be,
And the moon welcomes the deep of it.
It was marred coition who darkened that day,
Even the little ant were desperate for the morning light.

Stilled sorrows swarmed her bones and marrows,
When faceless masquerades,
Sift her taste aside.
In sulky aches she lay crucified,
And wet the soil with hapless tears,
Hapless indeed in the slyness of a rapist.

She is the gold my mother told me about,
That got stolen in the spirit of an orchard,
Under the moonlight of a winter night.

Her breath ruffles into the garden,
With naked thighs shaking gracelessly.

Maiden, pure, vestal and a chaste,
Led apart the way to shame.
With all her stars and riddles of innocence,
From crippled days of sinlessness,
That clays the demon of carnal cognition,
Dynamism furnished with heartiness,
Biffed her virtue far away.

Indignant sapiens,
Whose brainwaves,
Whirls around dirty actions,
Amiss legality and rational principles,
That steals away golden ladies,
From our profound societies.
With lightening from the skies,
I'd like a thunder drift,
To snap their filthy souls amiss the earth.

A misery wild and raging to the ears.

Just before her wedding day,
Faceless shadows thrust her virginity,
From the globe of her cuteness.
Her past looked at her and said;
When shall your present be as me?


Scheme ABCAAA BBAAXA AAA DX AXXBDBX EBEXFFXAX X AAXAC
Poetic Form
Metre 11100011 110100110 01101111 001100111 111111011 10010101010101 11010101 1101 10101 0111110 01011101 100100101010 11011101101 111000101110 100110101 011001010 1101101 10110001 1010111 11010101100 110111 11010110010 1001011 1010101 010100 11 1011010 0101000100100 11011010 110010100 1100101 110101 1111010101 01001010101 1010101 101100100 1011010 0111001 11110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,391
Words 283
Sentences 14
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 3, 2, 7, 9, 1, 5
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

"Just Before Her Wedding Day" is an emotional poem that depicts the theme of rape, the pain in it, and how it unveils the hidden glory of a virgin. The poetic words and lines in the poem vividly reveals the stance of the poet about rape, his disliking attitude towards it and the condition of the victim just before her weeding day.

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Written on October 06, 2022

Submitted by guzalisolomon on October 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Solomon Guzali

My name is Solomon Guzali. I was born on 25th of May 2005. I grew up in Raba village, Magma local government area of Niger state, Nigeria. I attended Solid Foundation School Salka and obtained my primary school living certificate. Am currently an o level student seeking admission to the university. My current town is Salka, in Niger state, Nigeria. more…

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