Analysis of I need you mommy



I go to sleep at night , I dream about my mommy, I’m always seeing you mommy but you always turn and walk away. In my dreams mommy I’ve seen you In prison and I scream and scream mommy but you are never there. Mommy I want to hear your sweet voice sing again only if it a few words mommy. I see you in my dreams mommy but you always walk away.


Scheme A
Poetic Form Monorhyme
Metre 111111110111011101101111010101110111010011011011110110111111110110110111011101110111101
Characters 348
Words 72
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 263
Words per line (avg) 73
Letters per stanza (avg) 263
Words per stanza (avg) 73

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My mom always appears in my dreams

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Written on September 26, 2022

Submitted by Bettyagnew379 on September 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Betty Agnew

 · 1970 · New York

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