Analysis of Even between us

Aslihan Capin 1976 (Istanbul)



You know well how to ask for forgiveness.
Like me;
Trapped in soil ,
Stuck in stone ,
Wilted in spring,
Rotten unknown,
You see you are just like me.

Like bro , your hands was shaking in  the bottom of somewhere , dont want see no body
Although you exist Thank God !
Just yesterday and tomorrow afternoon for tea....


Scheme XAXBXBA AXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111010 11 101 101 1001 1001 1111111 1111110001011111110 110111 1100010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 317
Words 65
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 3
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 31

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I wrote my feelings I could not freely expose

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Written on February 02, 2022

Submitted by aslihan_c on September 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Aslihan Capin

Born in Istanbul , Turkey. Raised in NY USA Studied fine arts, graduated audio engineer and music production. Recently finished fashion. Design and shoe collection design in Istanbul as 6 months training, interested in the design area for last 3 years. I write poems since childhood many are lost but somewhere in the universe as it was me Asi more…

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