Analysis of V Day
Pat Bautista 1976 (Acapulco)
All’s fair in love and war
Or so they say
But then I hear that war is hell
So tell me, what conclusion am I to draw
Would victory have saved us
Did all our fights amount to something
Or did we merely fight battles
Forsaking the cause
Vying for the right to author our love’s story
For history is written by the conquerors
And for what
The valley of hope and aspiration is gone
Overgrown by malice and broken promise
The seeds we’d sewn together
The harvest we both, in turn, did reap
Yet, lo, there was a time
Fresh faced and ideal
When passion did trumpet the charge
And reckless we stormed
Armed only with flesh
While machine gun kisses did hammer our heart’s defenses
With unremitting fury and merciless precision
Before the politic
Before the rhetoric
When the needs of the many trumped that of the one
And bodies shown glistening from the heat of our exchange
Before the fires grew cold
Colder still, the sheets you left me lying in
Now silence sighs throughout the valley
And tenuous truce masks brutal truth
The spoils of war have spoiled us
Scheme | XXXX AXXXBX XXAXX XXXXXXC DDCXXX BXA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110101 1111 11111111 11110101111 1100111 1110101110 11110110 01001 1010111010110 110011010100 011 01011001011 0111001010 0111010 010110111 111101 11001 11011001 01011 11011 101110110101010 1010100100010 01010 010100 101101011101 010110010111001 0101011 10101111100 110101010 010011101 0111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,071 |
Words | 208 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 6, 5, 7, 6, 3 |
Lines Amount | 31 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 141 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 32 |
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