Analysis of To: The Others



To the others including Satanist and atheist,

Whether you become a believer, or whatever.

My aim is never to make anyone religious,

It is only as a Witness to share what’s better.

What was intended has been done literally,

Prophecy is fulfilled and it continues to be.

Unveiled… Secrets “Oh Say Can You See!?”

Judaism, Christianity, Islam, Others: “Obey Me.”

From His Laws through Grace to Submission,

The main commonalities are in His Revelation.

If we don’t come together by His permission,

The end is near like past times in succession.

Though I am Muslim your choice is all yours,

I’ve found my peace, I’m completely restored.

I see the end result and it hurts to the core,

And I bear witness that you closed the door.

To the Jews, Christians, Muslims and Others,

The scriptures have thread that bind together,

They are prophets with similarities: Brothers,

Same message if followed they endure forever.

The proof is: dying faith, non-belief and terror,

Enemies of all religions, it doesn’t even matter.

If you don’t figure it out and find out the answer,

False preachers/prophets will still be your savior.

It’s a damn shame and who’s really the blame,

Can I say that I was taught wrong: fire don’t burn?

That one plus one is six or Iblis is Trumps name?

In the end is hell, and only because I didn’t learn.

To the others including Satanist and atheist,

Whether you become a believer, or whatever.

My aim is never to make anyone religious,

It is only as a Witness to share what’s better.


Scheme A B C B d d d d e e e e x x f f g b g b b b b b h i h i A B C B
Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,555
Words 324
Sentences 17
Stanzas 32
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 8

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Can I say that I was taught wrong: fire don’t burn? That one plus one is six or Iblis is Trumps name?

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Submitted by TheArkProject on July 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Raheem Muhammad

Active Revolutionist from Chicago, by way of New Jersey, Atlanta, Birmingham, and now NOLA; dedicating his life to establish a truly independent economic system for the poor and oppressed peoples of America first. Fighting for those faces you see and don't see on the websites: THE ARK PROJECT LLC THE BEEP INC. BEEP BLACK WALL STREET BOOKS I'm Muslim, I'm Black and I'm American so I guess I have three strikes against me LOL. I'm here reaching out to those concerned about the great divides that no-one wants to address and I'm here to address them head-on (Social Injustice, Islamophobia, Systematic Oppression, etc...). I am the author of this book: "Oh, Say Can You See!?" (Secrets) & Truth Is In The Art which shows how passionate I am about what was done and what continues to be done and ignored. Poetry is as a result of my life experiences as well as my opinions. They are my studies of the scriptures while paralleling them with history along with the present day's crimes against humanity, by those that claim to govern us. Keep in mind that my love for this country is beyond measure and incomparable. However, there are principles that a person ascertains to and therefore must stand upon. more…

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