Analysis of My little 'ol find



I sit in the scent of spring time alone.
I sit and listen to the soft waters.
The silent wind lowers my booming tone.
I watch as fathers play with their daughters.

The Springtime has many vibrant colors.
A different and new pattern on each rock.
I see green shades that compare to dollars.
I feel as if I've been freed from a lock.

It showers but flowers bloom with power.
It creates the energy that we need.
Watching them bloom helps pass the hour.
We watch them find ways to feed.

I sit and depict this in my ‘ol mind.
Someday someone will like my ‘ol find.


Scheme ABAB BCBC DEDE FF
Poetic Form
Metre 1100111101 1101010110 0101101101 1111011110 011101010 01000110111 1111101110 1111111101 1101101110 1010100111 101111010 1111111 1100110111 1111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 567
Words 124
Sentences 15
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

it is just about an old women whom is arriving upon her last years and she talks about what she sees and wants to remember when she passes on.

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Written on December 03, 2022

Submitted by jizelarmstrong on April 28, 2022

Modified on March 08, 2023

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