Analysis of what the fuck is wrong with you?”



you ask me what the fuck is wrong with me
you
your time
your love
your warmth
I want one more moment
one more brief moment
where I can dream of you
where you are all mine
where you hold me and tell me
you love me
and how much I mean to you
I will admit it
I love
I love you
come back for one more moment
and free me


Scheme ABCDEFFBGAABHDBFA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011111 1 11 11 11 111110 11110 111111 11111 1111011 111 0111111 11011 11 111 1111110 011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 315
Words 72
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 244
Words per stanza (avg) 72

About this poem

A poem about shuttering love. Love, that you want to be freed from. Love that takes more than give, and love that feels better than any other love.

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Written on March 01, 2022

Submitted by maiju_h on March 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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