Analysis of Last breath
Last Breath
as i walk through the shadows of death
the song in my heart sings even more beautifully
for i have no fear of what is left
i appreciate nothing knowing ive given'
all that i can give to be loving
as love fuels the song in my heart
i have sang it until my heart has toughened
toughened for this exact moment
as my power growed potent
it is released for this peace
in the face of defeat ive grown
immortal in the hearts of people
i fear no evil for im walking from these
shadows into his throne
as i walk towards this throne
i have no fear of leaving home
for this is my place and my hearts tone
will be given to my creator straight to
the people who stopped me from being alone
i have not lived a mess for my clear picture of life
found blessings in stress my sins have been confessed
i grown from them for this moment of my last
breath
Scheme | AAXX XXXX BBXCXXC CXCXC XXXA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11 11110111 010111101100 111111111 10101010110 111111110 111001011 11110111110 10110110 1110110 1101111 00110111 010001110 11110111011 10111 1110111 11111101 111110111 11101101011 01011111001 1111011111011 11001111101 11111110111 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 860 |
Words | 182 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 7, 5, 4 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 135 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 34 |
About this poem
this is my idea of a beautiful death this reflects on my belief that life is meant to fulfill death
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Written on February 02, 2022
Submitted by MichaelShawn08 on February 02, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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