Analysis of I miss you.



I cant sleep anymore all i do is stay up late,
And i think of you when i lay awake,
I'm confused and i don't know what to do,
because i miss you,

Is it wrong your always on my mind,
I want to talk but the words are hard to find,
I hate crying my mind through and through,
Because i miss you,

I loved the times when i used to hold you tight,
I Pray we will be back together i wont give up the fight,
All the bad words i said were not True,
I really miss you,

I guess you dont want me like i want you,
Please believe me these words are totally true,
If you want to be loved like most do,
Im right here waiting because i miss you....


Scheme xxaA bbaA ccaa aaaa
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 111011111111 0111111101 1010111111 01111 11111111 11111011111 111011101 01111 11011111111 111111010111101 101111011 11011 1111111111 10111111001 111111111 1111001111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 633
Words 154
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Written on January 09, 2000

Submitted by garethw894 on January 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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