Analysis of A piece of pie.



A piece of pie.

You made me a pie.
You said it was sweet.
I saw it was my favorite and couldn’t wait to eat. You sprinkled sugar on top and cut me a piece.
As I ate greedily a grin grew on your face, just then I tasted, a very strange taste, salty and bitter, not one bit of sugar you laughed as I cried, the salt burned my wounds, what did I expect, I know it’d be salt but still hoped for sugar, it’s been salt for 16 years who was I fooling.


Scheme A AXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 0111 11101 11111 1111110001111110101101101 111100011111111100101110010111110111110111111101111111111101111111110
Characters 454
Words 100
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 4
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 67
Words per line (avg) 19
Letters per stanza (avg) 167
Words per stanza (avg) 48

About this poem

This poem is about a teen being fooled with salt instead of sugar by her mother.

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Written on January 09, 2022

Submitted by itzjuztsadie on January 09, 2022

Modified on March 25, 2023

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