Analysis of The loss



Pain in my chest
Knowing I lost
Where do I start
How do I overcome the loss
Sadness dripping my eyes
Knowing I can’t overcome this pain
Know where to turn
How do I find my way
My heart just aches
The love that was there, but just hurting
All I have is memories
The love I have is true
Never forget the love
Always remember the good times
Knowing your not here by my side
Knowing you not picking me up if I fail
The loss will never be easy
Never fade
Loss will always be in the heart
Never forgotten.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRCS
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 1011 1011 1111 1111001 101011 10111011 1111 111111 1111 011111110 1111100 011111 100101 1010011 10111111 10111011111 01110110 101 1111001 10010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 518
Words 119
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 395
Words per stanza (avg) 102

About this poem

I wrote this poem for my dad which he had passed away in June miss him but I know he’s not suffering anymore.

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Written on January 26, 2022

Submitted by Roxannejeffery37 on January 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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