Analysis of irritation

Mariska 2005 (Minnesota)



Its overwhelming
trying to control this feeling
people tell me to keep breathing
I think i´ll stick with stealing
I can hear the dogs yelping
Its irritating
I miss the hospital
It was much more calming
popping these pills arent helping
I should really stop self harming
on my left arm
I need to work on healing
my emotions are revealing
I wish I could unfeel
All of this


Scheme AAAAAABAAACAABD
Poetic Form ~Monorhyme
Metre 1010 10101110 10111110 11111110 1110110 1100 11010 111110 10111010 11101110 1111 1111110 10101010 11111 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 359
Words 69
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 301
Words per stanza (avg) 69
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Written on September 15, 2021

Submitted by mariskahehr on September 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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