Analysis of TEARS OF PAIN



Lord take me from this cursed place,
wipe the tears from my face.
Take me from these walls of stone,
Where I sit all alone.
I feel like i'm living in Hell, Because when I open my eye's I'm still here.
Don't think I can Make it in my cell.
So I bow my head and I pray,
That tomorrow will be a better day.
I feel like my heart has been sentenced and locked away. Lord is this the way I have to spend the rest of my days, Walking around in a haze. Lord I ask you now for a new start,
Please put your love and joy in my heart,
And give me a new start.


Scheme AABBCDEEFFF
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 101111 1111111 111101 1111100101111011111 111111011 11111011 101110101 1111111100101111011111011111001001111111011 111101011 011011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 537
Words 119
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 410
Words per stanza (avg) 119
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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