my cosmic beauty(work in progress)





She made my wobbling life rock solid as an asteroid.
When she entered my life it glowed like a meteoroid.

I love to call her my reverse black hole,
As she absorbs all my darkness to enlighten my soul.

She is the earth in my life's galaxy.
She is exuberantly cute and gracefully sexy.

Her face can melt the pride of moon.
Her blue eyes are a matter of envy forNeptune.

Her smile can bring sweat on forehead of sun.
Her curly hair can cease the moving rings of Saturn.

Her glittering teeth can bring down millions of stars.
Her chubby reddish cheeks inflict suicidal feelings in mars.

Her lips can ignite all the love and beauty in Venus.
Her curves can bring down the sky to disliking of sky god Uranus.

She has a nose small like mercury and heart big as Jupiter.
She is the most beautiful girl ever created by the creator.

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Submitted on August 22, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BB CC DD XX EE FF GG
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 807
Words 155
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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