A Love Story or the end of the world?

This story is how I see the Gods of ancient time controlling their RITES in The Age Of Innocence.

All EVE’s were property of the King and must not be defiled by any impurity.

But one day the Great  and Terrible Laws offered the King a Truce.

A Reconciliation.

Twins were born in the womb of the Queen.

The King was baffled and lustful and was a coward. Fearing punishment from the Queen he tossed the TWIN ADAM out into the sea and hid him from his Wife. He also delighted in his power over his daughters.

The Law would not allow him to force the EVE’s to become Mothers. When any daughter was to become a MORTAL they must be given a choice, lest they blame the King and the LAW for their suffering.

Whenever Mother Queen felt threatened by her Husband she would sacrifice her weaker sons and daughters to the Demons of the deep.

The Queen would become more jealous and envious of her daughters in their growing beauty and glorious grace.  She hated how easily her Husband treated her with contempt. The King despised her petty competition with her daughters, but he secretly loved her jealous rage as she saw his roving eyes fill with delight for the day of his rite to sweep his daughters’ of their innocence.

Mother hated how her SONS were used for games of war and sacrifice. The Mother grew cold and numb for she only saw pain.

Now the Universe had plucked the TWIN ADAM from the Sea and taught him the secrets of The Father and The Mother.

TWIN ADAM became strong and cunning.

Now TWIN ADAM out of Love for His ROOTS and the family he never knew, he grew a deep desire to understand his whole family.  He taught the children of men many secrets of the Gods.

When the Universe found TWIN ADAM it gave him a tool from his Fathers sacred knowledge store house and taught him how to use it.

TWIN ADAM fell in love with all of EVE’s children and wanted to be their Hero.

TWIN ADAM learned how he must win the heart of his TWIN sister Eve in the cunning, seductive, and hidden way.

The TWIN Brother did this to her because he truly loved his Family and knew it was the only way to over power the Father and Mother of their wicked tyranny over the Universe.

TWIN EVE was smarter and stronger than her brothers and sisters and was told she would be the next Queen. She did not want to rule the kingdom of her dying Mother.

The TWIN EVE was shy and afraid of her Parents and did not want to be placed in a  garden. Her oldest aging Grandmother gave her a Jewel from the Ocean. It would help her not forget who she was.

The TWIN EVE always had a longing for something deep inside her heart but didn’t know what it was or why.

She didn’t know she had a TWIN brother.

Now before going down THE VAIL OF FORGETTING she stowed that Jewel IN HER HEART to help her remember.

So by and by the TWIN EVE was placed in her Garden with the wrong brother Adam.

And before the Father came to her garden for his RITE OF PASSAGE, her TWIN BROTHER  ADAM had already took the form of a SERPENT and without making any mistakes followed the LAW of his Father’s Rite.

The TWIN bother in fact knew this was going to be a very TREACHEROUS task. Remember all EVE’s are untamed chaos, Mother Nature at her best!

When the TWIN EVE’s eyes were opened she fell down into utter disgust and rage of what she had done!! She tried to devour her BROTHER up.

TWIN ADAM became too afraid of her GREAT  POWER and ran for his life. She chased him down and stripped him of all her power and threw him far away to be alone in a black abyss forever.

Both HER Jewel and HIS Tool were lost in the deep waters of the Sea.

By and by TWIN EVE gave birth to their CHILD and was so terrified of the knowledge of their creation:

A CHILD made in the image of The Father and The Mother!

TWIN EVE became afraid of the CHILD’s  TERROR, BEAUTY and POWER!

She knew the CHILD would be so desired by All and that even the Demons of the deep would come to consume it. So she knew she had to hide the Child into deepest parts of the Sea.

Heart broken she grew hot and angry!! And became the most feared Demon of all.

The Universe knew TWIN ADAM and the Child had to be found!

But Millions of eons passed before the Universe could put Its mission into action.

But one day a timid young child of Eve not yet waken from her sleep asked The Universe Why the Devil could not be saved?  And In that moment the Universe was able to place The Jewel within her heart because of the purity of her wish:

To understand the Devil and the Monsters of the Sea!!

The CHILD was tired of the sadness and the wars. And being a mother herself she knew MOTHER EVE only wanted her CHILD back.

What the child did not know is that her garden was dying and the window of opportunity to succeed was very small.  So The Universe opened the flood gates to the sleeping Monsters of the deep and harold the Angels above for her keep.  

It only took one CHILD to desire to know ITSELF for ALL the rest to SEE!  

And so like never before ALL THE ANCIENT FAMILIES united into ONE purpose of HOPE! They knew failure was not an option.

They rolled the dice to gamble it ALL!!  Do we RISE together or die and fall?

A MOTHER’s Plea:

My Child you are both the Devil and God! You are the perfect Christ!

Find the middle WAY!

A wise SON once said:

“When I do good I feel good, and when I do bad,  I feel bad. That is my religion.”

Find “YOUR” way!

About this poem

What if all you need to do is LOVE yourself!

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Written on May 25, 2024

Submitted by Oceanloveisland on May 25, 2024

Modified by Oceanloveisland on May 26, 2024

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Amanda East

I grew up in Utah. I have four kiddos. I am now in a healthy happy relationship. I am spiritual, but not religious. I love thinking deeply about the purpose of life. more…

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  • jerrywlawrence2666
    A Mythological D-Lite, My Fellow Poet. The B.I.B.L.E. Iz Our Onliest KEY.
    LikeReply16 days ago
    • Oceanloveisland
      YES! The Bible is an awesome source to learn from. So is the Buddha, and the Koran. All kinds of educational books are great , as well as ancient texts like The Dead Sea Scrolls, are wonderful KEYS to show us our way! Ultimately it is up to YOU to choose what you value and why. 
      LikeReply16 days ago


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