Silky Thoughts Are Sequenced



I'm changing up my motive
You no longer run my mind
I'm not angry that you didn't call
I hope that our thoughts a line...

So stay safe and be kind
And love your broken peaces
Stay curious and silly
Maybe in 20 years,
You'll look back and see this.

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Submitted by Sproutheadedhurt on May 08, 2022

Modified by Sproutheadedhurt on May 11, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXX ABXBB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 249
Words 53
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 5

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3 Comments
  • Sproutheadedhurt
    Okay, do what you think is right. Trust your gut. You can not call anymore we have all new numbers (we moved), but I think that is for the better. I mean this in the best way, you are not allowed to say you love me. Respectfully, I do not want to hear that. You can feel whatever you would like, but you saying it does not line up with your actions. Stay safe, surround yourself with good people. I wont be posting about our situation anymore, so assume the poems are not about you (: 
    LikeReply2 years ago
  • charlotteb.03116
    look on my profile em, It explains everything...remember I do care about you still and I do love you. But it was hurting to call you and I have a path I need to stay on and sadly, NFI wasn't a part of that path in life. I had to realize that and it's almost like the cards say "Let go of the past, don't hold onto it just because you're scared of the future". But I will call occasionally, just not as often if not at all. 
    LikeReply2 years ago
  • charlotteb.03116
    hope you can see this, but I still love you
    LikeReply2 years ago

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